lunes, 9 de febrero de 2009

A cHaRiTy EvEnT!!!

Hello!! I'm going to tell you how I would raise money for a charity:


I would organise many activities for children and parents; some of these would be:



-A competition of art.
-Courts of football, basketball, tennis.

-A quiz about many subjects.

-A tortoise race:



In this activity, the contestants must to take their tortoises and the animal that arrives first to the finishing line wins the game and the maste earn the money.

The people that win some activity earn some money and this money goes to the charity.

I think this is the best form of raise money and go to the people have a good time too.


I hope we raise a lot of money!!

























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































1 comentario:

  1. Hi Lorena! Thanks for putting this post on your blog. Here are my corrections below.



    Hello!! I'm going to tell you how I would raise money for a charity:

    I would organise many activities for children and parents; some of these would be:
    -(A) AN ART competition (of art).
    -(Courts of ) Football, basketball, AND tennis TOURNAMENTS.
    -A quiz about many subjects.

    -A tortoise race:


    In this activity, the contestants must (to take) BRING their tortoises and the animal that arrives (first) to the finishing line FIRST wins the game and the (maste)OWNER earnS the money.

    The people that win some activitIES earn some money and this money goes to the charity.


    PS: Maybe you should edit this post and delete all the extra space that appears at the end.

    ResponderEliminar